Communication Is A Virus... Pitch Feedback

Assessed by: Steph and Josh

PRESENTATION
How professional was the verbal element of the presentation? Was it delivered with clarity? What might have improved it?

Impeccable.
Made sense- order to it.

How professional was the visual element of the presentation? How well were the boards designed? What might have improved them?

Clear, concise- not too busy.
Remember the 'little book of charm'.

PROPOSAL
What is the message?

Be nice to people.

Is there a clear sense of audience? Who is the project targeting?

Everyone?

What context(s) will the message exist in? How does the proposed solution answer the 'virus' element of the brief?

Compliments the spread from one person to another.

Overall, what do you think of the proposal?

Cupcakes - yeah!
Be good but what if the person giving a compliment doesn't get one.

How feasible is the project? If you were the client, would you be prepared to fund the project so it could go ahead? Have you been convinced?

I can see the project being made successfully. It's a good idea that people should find easy to do.