Tuesday, 6 April 2010

Communication Is A Virus... Pitch Feedback 2

Assessed by: Nick & Kim

PRESENTATION
How professional was the verbal element of the presentation? Was it delivered with clarity? What might have improved it?

Yes, was clear what they wanted to do, good amount of information...more visuals?

How professional was the visual element of the presentation? How well were the boards designed? What might have improved them?

Good! Clear connection of all three boards and thmed throughout - more statistics.

PROPOSAL

What is the message?

Get people to compliment each other more.
Is there a clear sense of audience? Who is the project targeting?

Unsure.

What context(s) will the message exist in? How does the proposed solution answer the 'virus' element of the brief?

Distributing a product - a flip book.Overall, what do you think of the proposal?

Good! Think they could have a lot of fun with it.

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